Do you remember all those words you whispered into my sheets?
Have you found someone new to keep you warm at night
because I miss listening to the sound of you breathing as we sleep
and I just want your hand to find mine in the darkness one more time.
-July 2014
just beautiful…lovely the way you can express something like this and get me to feel that ache ive known so well yet word it just so beautifully 🙂
Thank you so much! I think its an ache many of us have felt, Im glad I came close to hitting the mark.
Oh yes I think you are right for many of us the pain is real…you definitely hit the mark! XO!
Thank you for being so kind!
my pleasure! 🙂
This is so beautifully written – especially that last line. Really excellent piece – thanks for sharing it.
Thanks for the wonderful comment! I always like ending a poem on a strong line.
Having just read an earlier piece, I think this is what I mean when I said you become more sensual. Here in just a few lines you connect with the experiences of others in a delicate way 🙂